I am a Year 6 student at David st School in Morrinsville, New Zealand
I like it hunter good dinosaur one
I like the way you yoused grinding
I like the way you used dicribing words
Awesome poem Hunter. Loved the way you used your 'ing' words to describe what the dinosaurs were doing. Can you think of any other 'ing' words to describe their actions?
That was a good poem Hunter from Carma
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Wow i like that story i liked how you described the baby dinosaurs and next time you should use a full stop at the end .
I like it hunter good dinosaur one
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ReplyDeleteAwesome poem Hunter. Loved the way you used your 'ing' words to describe what the dinosaurs were doing. Can you think of any other 'ing' words to describe their actions?
ReplyDeleteThat was a good poem Hunter
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ReplyDeleteWow i like that story i liked how you described the baby dinosaurs and next time you should use a full stop at the end .
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